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9th Grade
Honorable Mention
Identity
Smell the rain on the wind,
inspiring a lazy sort of feeling,
bringing memories of the last time
it poured.
Taste a bit of vindaloo curry,
scald your mouth,
and savor the tang of the exotic
spice.
Listen to my entire itunes library
the pop, jazz, reggae, and oldies
—
invite me to sing along.
Pet a rabbit at the petting zoo,
going into sneezing fits as you
leave,
lasting the entire day.
See yourself
as you’re seeing me,
just as we really are.
by Caitlin Hatakeyama
9th grade, Punahou School
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