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2009 Seventh Grade Winning Poems

 

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Warm Satisfaction

 

The depressing dark rain clouds

block the sun

as I climbed up the stairs

after a chilly day.

I am greeted by the shrimpy smell of saimin broth.

“Do you want some?” Grandpa asks.

“Yes, please,” I answer in delight.

Anxiously I watch as Grandpa

places plump noodles in a large bowl

and drenches them

with hot shrimp and green-onion flavored broth.

I almost dance with excitement

as I witness the white and pink half-moon slices of kamaboko

and the saltiest strips of spam

float in the bowl.

I take my first sip of the scrumptious soup.
Ah!

I am overwhelmed with this warm satisfaction.

 

by Austyn Lee

7th grade, `Iolani School

 

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