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2009 Eleventh Grade Winning Poems

 

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Rain

 

Rain Clinks

                 On     the

Metal

            Watering can.

It collects the cool

                        Drops.

Then, Suddenly,

 

All the drops come down at once.

The clinking turns to

Clatter and all goes

Dark as they fall faster.

The drops in the can pour

Over the lip, as it floods

Wild. Uncontrollable.

They flow out of the

Harsh iron skeleton, like

Tears from a newborn baby’s

Eyes, and they soak the soil,

Drowning it.

 

 

And as soon as it came, the storm disappears.

Through the grey clouds, a hint of sun illuminates the

aftermath.

 

 

by Lianne Chung

11th grade, `Iolani School

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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